Difference between revisions of "Talk:Elena Tzalel"
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| − | '''Hannah Weirens | + | '''Hannah Weirens:''' Although this is a draft, Elena did a very surface-level analysis of her data identity. She briefly described the search results she found when she searched for herself. She can work to develop this before the final version of the data identity assignment is due, as well as add at least two photos, since she did not add any yet and that was required for the assignment. Elena wrote in a very conversational style, which made it very easy to follow. And although it flowed nicely and didn’t have any noticeable grammatical errors, she does have to add a decent amount more to reach the recommended length for this assignment so that would be something to be more concerned about later. I also think Elena could add sections to her profile (instead of having it as one large body of text). Overall, I think Elena is off to a good start for her draft and just needs to continue developing it! |
Revision as of 22:42, 24 February 2021
Hannah Weirens: Although this is a draft, Elena did a very surface-level analysis of her data identity. She briefly described the search results she found when she searched for herself. She can work to develop this before the final version of the data identity assignment is due, as well as add at least two photos, since she did not add any yet and that was required for the assignment. Elena wrote in a very conversational style, which made it very easy to follow. And although it flowed nicely and didn’t have any noticeable grammatical errors, she does have to add a decent amount more to reach the recommended length for this assignment so that would be something to be more concerned about later. I also think Elena could add sections to her profile (instead of having it as one large body of text). Overall, I think Elena is off to a good start for her draft and just needs to continue developing it!
