Talk:Dynamic Pricing Algorithms

Length

The length of the entire article is about 1300 words. It is slightly over the required word count as we were only tasked to write around 1000 words. Nonetheless, it could be possible that this article has been updated since the first draft. However, from the first glance, it seems like each section has been proportionally distributed among the entire article.

Structure

I definitely liked how you structured the article as a whole, it has different sections and subsections which makes finding information easier or navigating throughout the article more manageable. Especially in the sections after the introduction, where you introduced the history of dynamic pricing algorithms, then further on elaborating the types of algorithms. The subsections on usage in industries as well as the ethical issues have been broken down clearly. Where most of your text has been cited well.

Clarity

The issue at stake is clear to me based on what has been posted. I feel like more examples could be added, and maybe another section on top of what has been discussed already to add more context to it. Overall, it could be slightly elaborated further to reach the minimum word count for the complete draft.

Objective Reporting

You did a good job of writing this from a neutral perspective without letting your biases come into play. I couldn’t really find terms that related to hedging that may show signs of opinions or suggestions. More detail could be added on the ethical issues.