Talk:Twitter changes under Elon Musk

1. Great job with the length of your article! You're very close to the final 2500 needed for the final assignment, so it should be easy for you to reach that when the time comes.

2. The structure of your article was very clear and made it easy as the reader to follow the introduction, the points you wanted to introduce, and how those might impact Twitter. Starting with the opening paragraph, I liked how you introduced the situation of Elon Musk purchasing Twitter but also gave some background of what Twitter is as a company. Then, by giving a brief history of Twitter, it gave the reader an idea of how this controversy might have started if they had no background knowledge about the situation. Lastly, the introduction of Musk's purchase of Twitter, followed by its ethical implications, was helpful organization-wise because it made all the information presented easy to follow. For the final article, the only thing I can suggest is adding graphics that help the reader understand and making the larger sections more interesting, and filling in any potential information lapses in the article since you have a little more flexibility to increase your word count. Great job!

3. Your article made the issues at stake very clear, and as I read, I could easily understand how the ethical issues in the article came about through Musk's acquisition. Also, the last section outlining the ethical issues helped me clearly understand how some of these new changes may help or hurt Twitter users, which I gathered was the goal of your article.

4. Lastly, I felt you did a good job at avoiding any language that might imply an opinion to maintain neutrality in your writing. All of the statements were backed up with strong sources, and when applicable, both sides of the argument were presented in an attempt to remain neutral.

Good Job! - Christian Sanchez