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| + | I really enjoyed reading your Facebook Avatar analysis, it was very refreshing to read your piece from a third person perspective because it was almost like I could see your thoughts as you were going through your profile. I know I struggled to find out what to write about myself and this was a good way of putting that into writing. I can relate to many of the things you wrote about, in my piece I wrote about the turning point of my Facebook page once I met my girlfriend as well. It was especially funny and relatable when you brought up how your girlfriend has an "incessant need to document their every doing together with the camera on her phone" because that is my opinion as well. Although I feel like your piece would have been more engaging if you laid out the progression of your Facebook profile, so we could kind of get a mini narration of your life going back to when your account was created. | ||
| + | Other than that I thought that your pictures complimented your writing very well. However, I think that Professor Conway told us that the standard Michigan info boxes were not as useful for Facebook Avatars(Even I had used it earlier!) | ||
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| + | William Juang | ||
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Revision as of 23:36, 28 March 2016
Comment #1: Hey Travis!
I really enjoyed reading your Facebook Avatar analysis, it was very refreshing to read your piece from a third person perspective because it was almost like I could see your thoughts as you were going through your profile. I know I struggled to find out what to write about myself and this was a good way of putting that into writing. I can relate to many of the things you wrote about, in my piece I wrote about the turning point of my Facebook page once I met my girlfriend as well. It was especially funny and relatable when you brought up how your girlfriend has an "incessant need to document their every doing together with the camera on her phone" because that is my opinion as well. Although I feel like your piece would have been more engaging if you laid out the progression of your Facebook profile, so we could kind of get a mini narration of your life going back to when your account was created. Other than that I thought that your pictures complimented your writing very well. However, I think that Professor Conway told us that the standard Michigan info boxes were not as useful for Facebook Avatars(Even I had used it earlier!)
William Juang
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