Talk:Tony Wang

Hey Tony, I really enjoyed reading you page and it gave me a lot of insight on how I can improve my own identity assignment. To start off I think you did a great job setting expectations at the beginning of your page. You acknowledged that the combination of your lack of effort to keep your identity hid on the internet and your very common last name made it very difficult to find yourself online which I think is an important point to make before diving into your paper. I think the flow of your paper was very smooth and made reading your page a fun read with a concise ending. If I had to make a suggestion, I might suggest detailing Snapchat's privacy policy as you seem to be the most involved with that platform albeit still not too frequently. Snapchat also has a feature where you can look at the categories that Snapchat places you in. Although this information is not public available to anyone besides you and Snapchat, I think adding a quick reaction to the categories that Snapchat puts you in could add to this assignment by showing exactly how accurately these platforms represent you in their eyes. Overall, great job you tied your paper together really well!