Talk:Tim Michowski

Hey Tim, nice Wiki entry! I had some similar experiences regarding the databroker reports. Lots of my own information wasn't able to be scraped, but rather information regarding potential family members was gathered. It's interesting how that works regarding anonymity and identifiability. I really appreciate your use of pictures as well! As a reader, it definitely kept me engaged. I also enjoy how you have a bunch of organized and illustrated talking points, making your entry flow well!

When you do revise this, I would suggest adding in more content to your illustrated talking points. Sections including: What's there about me?, What isn't out there about me?, and Self Preservation are lacking in information. Perhaps you could combine some of these sections into one. I also didn't see much of a reference to any of the course readings. I would suggest connecting your online identity to some of the main points of one of the class readings, and then also adding a References page at the bottom. Your report is filled with such great information, just a few little tweaks and it will be perfect!

- Jack Pakela