Talk:Tim Michowski

Hey Tim, nice Wiki entry! I had some similar experiences regarding the databroker reports. Lots of my own information wasn't able to be scraped, but rather information regarding potential family members was gathered. It's interesting how that works regarding anonymity and identifiability. I really appreciate your use of pictures as well! As a reader, it definitely kept me engaged. I also enjoy how you have a bunch of organized and illustrated talking points, making your entry flow well!

When you do revise this, I would suggest adding in more content to your illustrated talking points. Sections including: What's there about me?, What isn't out there about me?, and Self Preservation are lacking in information. Perhaps you could combine some of these sections into one. I also didn't see much of a reference to any of the course readings. I would suggest connecting your online identity to some of the main points of one of the class readings, and then also adding a References page at the bottom. Your report is filled with such great information, just a few little tweaks and it will be perfect!

- Jack Pakela

Hey Tim, I found your data identity through your name vs. your data identity through your gaming screen name to be very intriguing. In the beginning, you open up with a mystery on "someone" close to you that impacted your choices to be findable on Google. However, it seems you never refer back to that point and I would love to know more detail on why you chose to remain anonymous on the Internet. I also wish you talked more about Discord because this is one of the first times I have read about that. You seem to include a picture, but I would love more written detail about it. I like how you identified the pros and cons of having a lack of social media and I think you can go into more depth on those pros and cons and enhance your "Good or Bad" section. If you were a recruiter, how would you respond to your own online profile?

- Aashia Mehta