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The "Controversy" section of the article is written in such a way that it heavily slanted against online advertising and does not present information about the topic. It should perhaps be re-written in a way that lends a more neutral tone that defines issues within the field, without using terminology that influences readers in one direction or another. ~Lynette Wall | The "Controversy" section of the article is written in such a way that it heavily slanted against online advertising and does not present information about the topic. It should perhaps be re-written in a way that lends a more neutral tone that defines issues within the field, without using terminology that influences readers in one direction or another. ~Lynette Wall | ||
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+ | The "Opt-in vs Opt-out" section is also written in a biased manner, specifically toward the end where it talks about privacy violations and what "most people think." It needs a source to back up that information or to be re-written in an unbiased manner. |
Revision as of 22:17, 13 December 2011
The "Controversy" section of the article is written in such a way that it heavily slanted against online advertising and does not present information about the topic. It should perhaps be re-written in a way that lends a more neutral tone that defines issues within the field, without using terminology that influences readers in one direction or another. ~Lynette Wall
The "Opt-in vs Opt-out" section is also written in a biased manner, specifically toward the end where it talks about privacy violations and what "most people think." It needs a source to back up that information or to be re-written in an unbiased manner.