Talk:So Min An
From SI410
Gordon Chan's Review
Hey So Min, what a well-written data identity statement! I think you did a very thorough investigation into your online data identity, and I admire your diligence in finding yourself by searching for your father on the data broker, even when searching your own name returned no results.
The overall look of your statement is very polished, and the formatting gives the statement a clear and solid structure. I can clearly see the different parts of your investigation and the formatting is logical and makes your statement easy to read. As for my suggestions, I would say that perhaps your images could be slightly larger, as I had to open them on a separate page to view them properly. Overall though, well done!