Talk:So Min An

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Gordon Chan's Review

Hey So Min, what a well-written data identity statement! I think you did a very thorough investigation into your online data identity, and I admire your diligence in finding yourself by searching for your father on the data broker, even when searching your own name returned no results.

The overall look of your statement is very polished, and the formatting gives the statement a clear and solid structure. I can clearly see the different parts of your investigation and the formatting is logical and makes your statement easy to read. As for my suggestions, I would say that perhaps your images could be slightly larger, as I had to open them on a separate page to view them properly. Overall though, well done!


Seth Wickham's Review

Hi So min! Interesting case study with having a celebrity of the same name! That is apparently a good way to keep a low profile on google! I liked how you compartmentalized your search results from the different social media platforms. I found that my results differentiated among the platforms as well. I would also compliment your conclusion paragraph. I think it tied up your statement well and gave a clear summary of your final findings. The one thing I would recommend is that maybe you add more visuals to make your page more appealing to the eye but I think you have a strong foundation and a great structure going forward!