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| + | Hi Shameel! Thank you for including your target audience and how you intended your piece to be read at the very beginning. I thought it was very interesting, although a bit choppy. Maybe trying to integrate the observations of the onlooker, which were fairly insightful and consistent across platforms, and the proposed meaning of those observations would make the entry a little more smooth to read. Also maybe keeping the person looking at your account consistent across the platforms may help with how it reads as well. Overall, I did like the way it read and the fact that you sort of told the reader how to read it helped a lot in that process. | ||
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| + | I also enjoyed the ethical analysis you gave at the end. It made things more real and helped me, at least, to understand you, what you stand for, and how you present yourself. It does seem that you are consistent in how you present yourself over your Facebook and Instagram accounts, which is cool to me, as it seems that people tend to have several personas or parts of their personalities presented in their social media accounts. I think it would be cool to see a little more about how your LinkedIn plays a part in your personality, or how you reflect your personality on your LinkedIn, and how that has or has not impacted the way you present yourself on your other social media accounts. | ||
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Revision as of 03:04, 22 February 2018
Paulo Warren
I plan to respond to this avatar page
Second Response:
Hi Shameel! Thank you for including your target audience and how you intended your piece to be read at the very beginning. I thought it was very interesting, although a bit choppy. Maybe trying to integrate the observations of the onlooker, which were fairly insightful and consistent across platforms, and the proposed meaning of those observations would make the entry a little more smooth to read. Also maybe keeping the person looking at your account consistent across the platforms may help with how it reads as well. Overall, I did like the way it read and the fact that you sort of told the reader how to read it helped a lot in that process.
I also enjoyed the ethical analysis you gave at the end. It made things more real and helped me, at least, to understand you, what you stand for, and how you present yourself. It does seem that you are consistent in how you present yourself over your Facebook and Instagram accounts, which is cool to me, as it seems that people tend to have several personas or parts of their personalities presented in their social media accounts. I think it would be cool to see a little more about how your LinkedIn plays a part in your personality, or how you reflect your personality on your LinkedIn, and how that has or has not impacted the way you present yourself on your other social media accounts.
- -Alyssa Schmidt
