Talk:Serena Sabuda

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Hi Serena, I really enjoyed reading your page! You do a really good job of making it informative while still being personable and easy to read. I also like how you built a narrative with your page, starting with how your digital footprint started from wanting to be like your siblings, and then building your story from there. I also like how you analyze different social media accounts you have and the implications on your privacy separately. I also really liked your analysis at the end about your mixed feelings over some of your personal health history being available and how potential employers could look at that. For your final revision, I think you could spend more time discussing how what you can find online relates to your real-life identity. You discuss how your Pinterest reveals many of your interests, your Spotify could reveal what mood you're in, and there is a lot more of your personal information online. Do you think this accurately represents who you are in real life? Is there something missing or something that represents you inaccurately? Thank you for sharing your story, and I think you did a great job overall! -Rachel Westrick