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Hi Nell! Great work! I loved reading about the difference between how you felt about being searchable in the past and how you feel now. I completely agree that you are never seeing the whole person or story, but it is always hard to remember that. You do a great job at articulating your insight on the idea that you only know yourself, even though we are all still trying to figure ourselves out, and it is interesting to see how you came to this perspective. I especially love how you address the internet directly in your conclusion. Something that may be beneficial to your piece is breaking up some of your sections. For example, you may consider creating subsections in your section "Search Results" to categorize specific searches and results. Your order of information is already great, so just think about how you might split it up more. Because your name is so unique, I would be curious what other people show up in your results of searching your name on social media. Overall, good job! - Morgan Tucker | Hi Nell! Great work! I loved reading about the difference between how you felt about being searchable in the past and how you feel now. I completely agree that you are never seeing the whole person or story, but it is always hard to remember that. You do a great job at articulating your insight on the idea that you only know yourself, even though we are all still trying to figure ourselves out, and it is interesting to see how you came to this perspective. I especially love how you address the internet directly in your conclusion. Something that may be beneficial to your piece is breaking up some of your sections. For example, you may consider creating subsections in your section "Search Results" to categorize specific searches and results. Your order of information is already great, so just think about how you might split it up more. Because your name is so unique, I would be curious what other people show up in your results of searching your name on social media. Overall, good job! - Morgan Tucker | ||
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Morgan Tucker Comment
Hi Nell! Great work! I loved reading about the difference between how you felt about being searchable in the past and how you feel now. I completely agree that you are never seeing the whole person or story, but it is always hard to remember that. You do a great job at articulating your insight on the idea that you only know yourself, even though we are all still trying to figure ourselves out, and it is interesting to see how you came to this perspective. I especially love how you address the internet directly in your conclusion. Something that may be beneficial to your piece is breaking up some of your sections. For example, you may consider creating subsections in your section "Search Results" to categorize specific searches and results. Your order of information is already great, so just think about how you might split it up more. Because your name is so unique, I would be curious what other people show up in your results of searching your name on social media. Overall, good job! - Morgan Tucker
