Talk:Morgan Cary

Alyssa Roach's Commentary

Hi Morgan!

I really enjoyed reading your data integrity statement and loved how you started it. The intro was humorous and I loved how you incorporated the awkward pre teen stage of internet exploration that most people our age seem to have gone through. It wrapped me in and already showcased your personality. The second half of your intro was an excellent thesis statement that allowed me to see what was coming in your statement and encourage me to keep reading. First thing I noticed that you might want to consider changing is the first title "Morgan Cary", for me introduction or meet me or something along those lines would make it a lot easier to understand your organization and dive into your statement. I liked how you broke up your findings with rounds of analysis. I did have some confusion on the round two of your analysis, you mentioned adding different terms next to your name in the hopes of getting more relevant results. One of these terms was "Lucd" I don't know what this is so it was a little confusing to me. Maybe consider mentioning what this is or removing it as it may confuse other readers like me. I would also love a bit more analysis on the DuckDuckGo section. White pages websites honestly really freak me out and I would love to hear your opinions on how you feel about this information being so readily available. Lastly I thought your images were very effective and allowed me to get a sense of what you were seeing when writing and researching for this article. Over all a great start and I can't wait to read the final product!