Talk:Mike Wojan

Mike-

First off, it looks good! It's informative and covers the material necessary. I like that you focus on one aspect (profile picture) and really run it through its paces. Off the bat, I think you could include more of them. You mention a few by description, but as they say, a picture is worth 1000 words. Also, you only assess how truthful the picture is to you in one section, where I was under the impression that it was supposed to be more a focal point of the assignment (I could very well be wrong, so defininty down some salt with this). I did though like the way you put your picture in terms of what you wanted it to mean to friends. Also the secions on truth and cure had some good, thought provoking elements.

As for your writing style, it looked good. There were no grammatical or spelling errors that jumped out at me, which is good. The only thing I'll say is that your writing style/voice, while analytical and descriptive, seemed a little dry. Even though this is a paper for a grade and stuff, I feel like you could have a bit of fun tossed in there. But, it's well written, informative, and interesting, so I wouldn't sweat it too much. Good job!

~DavidB