Talk:Matthew Steinberg

I really like your post. It is very fun to read. The introduction is very creative and funny. The search process you went through for this assignment is well presented, and your thought process is detailed and flows well throughout this post. Even though you did not find very much information by googling yourself, but what you found later is very interesting. You found the information about you on your father’s White Pages’ result and your grandfather’s obituary, and you also discovered the information about other people who are sort of related to you but you have never met before. You give a nice analysis from the point of finding one’s online identity from other people’s online identity. This is a very unique angle. One suggestion I would give to improve this post is to divide it into several sections like search process and analysis. In this way, it is easier for readers to follow what you are talking about and the structure of the post will be a lot clearer. Jiangqiong(Joan) Liu