Talk:Marisa Lamberty

It was a little confusing in the opening paragraph, seeing the mix of Marisa in third-person and "I." However, as I read on, and re-read the paragraph a several times (I should note that I am quite bad at reading comprehension), it was very amusing to find out that you actually wrote this page as your Avatar. After sorting that fact, I was able to understand and navigate the rest of the page easily. Your tone is very objective and clean, writing it as a study of your Facebook page. I appreciate how objective it is - it allows me to synchronize as the unacquainted user who is truly seeing your public Facebook profile for the first time. However, I wish you included more details about "your" thoughts, not your Avatar's. Even when you chose to pick less and less "likes" in recent years, what led you to that behavior? What are your thoughts about privacy on Facebook? I think you did a wonderful job with the layout of the page. I might change the introduction paragraph to go above the table of contents, or even write a separate opening paragraph to highlight the purpose of this assignment. -- Chihiro