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Hi Lily, this was a very well-written and informative piece on your identity search. I like how you used multiple platforms and sources to further analyze how your media presence is portrayed and how much information is available about you at a click of a button. You included a strong thesis that was upheld with the evidence you provided throughout your MediaWiki Article. A recommendation I’d make would be to provide a backstory of how you protected (or didn’t) your identity before this assignment. Additionally, if you aren’t proud of your current online identity what are your plans to fix this, or what precautions will you take in the future to protect yourself? This could include deleting your VSCO or setting your Twitter to private mode. Overall, I think you did a great job with the flow between ideas, relaying your online identity in comparison to your thesis, and the steps you took to research this topic! | Hi Lily, this was a very well-written and informative piece on your identity search. I like how you used multiple platforms and sources to further analyze how your media presence is portrayed and how much information is available about you at a click of a button. You included a strong thesis that was upheld with the evidence you provided throughout your MediaWiki Article. A recommendation I’d make would be to provide a backstory of how you protected (or didn’t) your identity before this assignment. Additionally, if you aren’t proud of your current online identity what are your plans to fix this, or what precautions will you take in the future to protect yourself? This could include deleting your VSCO or setting your Twitter to private mode. Overall, I think you did a great job with the flow between ideas, relaying your online identity in comparison to your thesis, and the steps you took to research this topic! | ||
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Comment from Alexandra Sterchele:
Hi Lily, this was a very well-written and informative piece on your identity search. I like how you used multiple platforms and sources to further analyze how your media presence is portrayed and how much information is available about you at a click of a button. You included a strong thesis that was upheld with the evidence you provided throughout your MediaWiki Article. A recommendation I’d make would be to provide a backstory of how you protected (or didn’t) your identity before this assignment. Additionally, if you aren’t proud of your current online identity what are your plans to fix this, or what precautions will you take in the future to protect yourself? This could include deleting your VSCO or setting your Twitter to private mode. Overall, I think you did a great job with the flow between ideas, relaying your online identity in comparison to your thesis, and the steps you took to research this topic!
