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Hi Laurita! I am going to comment as I read each paragraph! | Hi Laurita! I am going to comment as I read each paragraph! | ||
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Revision as of 22:45, 21 February 2018
Hi Laurita! I am going to comment as I read each paragraph!
Intro
I really like your introduction paragraph because it is short and to the point. You do a good job of -Bhumika Jain
