Talk:Krithik Vallem

Comment from Aaron Zhang

I think your article could use some more sectioning or subsections. Your main Google search portion is around ¾ of the article with no subsections to break it down. You can break them up by area of search: jobs, clubs, social media, etc. I think you should also start with an introduction paragraph. Something about what you think data identity means and your expectations going into this assignment. I would take part of your possible explanations and use that in this opening paragraph. Also, I think you focus too much on what other people can assume based on what they can find online. I would suggest that you shift your focus towards how your data identity matches your actual identity. I don’t think you talk about what you think your identity is. Instead of hypothesizing about what a random person would think of you, you can talk about what you think about your data identity and why you think it came to be that way.