Talk:Kelsey Toporski

Jacob Polson's Comment

Hi Kelsey, I really like this write-up about you and your data identity. I especially liked the little headliner before the introduction that was in the third person. In general, I think this post is really well written, so the suggestions I make might be a bit of a stretch on if they will actually improve this article. One thing that stuck out to me in both of our cases is that our social media use started to dwindle as we got further into college. Similarly, which appeared to be the case for almost every post I've read on this site, our data broker profiles were lacking and old. I'm really curious to see if there is any correlation there. You could potentially touch base on that, or touch base on how your lack of social media use might be affecting your technological footprint? Another very slight thing I want to point out is the image size in your Images section. It's not a huge issue but it was slightly hard to follow what you were saying when the indentation of the words allows for 1-3 words per line. Maybe resizing the picture to be a little smaller could clean that up. Overall though, I thought this was a really good article.