Talk:Jonathan Timma
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Comment 1: I think that your autobiography is truthful and direct. It would have been nice if maybe you talked about some things you do outside of Facebook that may or not be reflected in it. You could have broken down into different sections to talk about specific aspects of your Facebook. I like the fat that you have an introduction section and a conclusion section. It would be nice if the conclusion was a bit longer. It might of been nice to tie in your pictures into the context of what your writing about in your autobiography or place them maybe by the sections of the autobiography that you thought were most relevant. Overall, it's a good autobiography, even though it is a little small. -Chance Evans
