Talk:Jesse Bruner
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Arif Jamaluddin's Comment
Hey Jesse,
This was a very well-written entry. I liked the flow of your essay. You were able to finish all your ideas well and connect your conclusion to your intro well. This provided a great assessment of the “real you”. Sometimes the logic could maybe be improved. In the begging, you talked about not using a data broker, but then alter you said you did, I was a little confused. And this is small but formatting the pictures to not “bleed” into other sections might make the essay easier to read. Overall, really good post!
