Talk:Jesse Bruner

Arif Jamaluddin's Comment

Hey Jesse,

This was a very well-written entry. I liked the flow of your essay. You were able to finish all your ideas well and connect your conclusion to your intro well. This provided a great assessment of the “real you”. Sometimes the logic could maybe be improved. In the begging, you talked about not using a data broker, but then alter you said you did, I was a little confused. And this is small but formatting the pictures to not “bleed” into other sections might make the essay easier to read. Overall, really good post!

Madison Ericksen's Comment

Hi Jesse! I sincerely enjoyed reading your page and loved the ethical implications you brought up. I found it fascinating that you discovered the influence perceptions have on identity and how inter-connected the two concepts are. Your discussion on the ethics of data brokers was also very interesting to me, and I feel you could even explore this more or maybe separate the ethical aspect of it to stand out on the page in some way. Lastly, another suggestion I have would be to swap out the paragraph under "The formation of identity" and the first paragraph under "My Identity" if you want to keep those headers. The reason is that to me, the latter paragraph talks much more about identity formation while the former talks about the inaccuracies of your digital identity. Thank you for writing such an amazing draft!