Talk:Jennifer Leung

Review by Patrick Riggs

Hey Jenn,

I like how you lead off into your article with a little review of what you're going to be talking about. You then seem to jump right in and analyze your Facebook page categorically - pictures, maps, apps, etc. Those all seem a bit disconnected from each other, as you seem to be looking at them all individually rather than as part of a greater narrative. Your theme is that you use your Facebook page to construct an identity of who you think you are, but the pieces just don't seem quite connected together underneath that theme.

I think you do a really good job analyzing what exactly each piece of your profile means, especially the Maps part. Everybody else seems to have been looking just at their pictures, but, as you say in your article, the spots you've visited on your map are also a really good indicator of your online identity. When you talk about pictures you also say how you censor what you're tagged in in order to maintain a certain image with your profile, which I think is really good analysis.

Overall I'd try and tie everything a bit tighter together, but otherwise it's really good. Good job!

Patrick Riggs