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After reading about your avatar, I found that I definitely did get a better sense of who you are and how you want to be portrayed online. I liked how honest you were when talking about how you choose your profile picture because I feel like many guys will not admit to choosing a picture they consider a decent looking picture of themselves and that they think about what others will think about them. I liked how you had a whole section to talk about music because it is obviously something that it very important to you and is a strong identifier of who you are in real life. | After reading about your avatar, I found that I definitely did get a better sense of who you are and how you want to be portrayed online. I liked how honest you were when talking about how you choose your profile picture because I feel like many guys will not admit to choosing a picture they consider a decent looking picture of themselves and that they think about what others will think about them. I liked how you had a whole section to talk about music because it is obviously something that it very important to you and is a strong identifier of who you are in real life. | ||
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I think your “About Me” section could have been a little more in depth for example; I would have liked to see more information about why you haven’t updated your content in a while and more about how you think others will use this section to judge you. I don’t think that it was necessary to write about advertisements on Facebook because other people don’t see the ads that are catered to you, therefore, they can’t really identify you based off of this but I can see how it could be a way you personally identify yourself. I wish your “Further Analysis” section could also have been slightly longer. The fact that you don’t think Facebook has any major restrictions is very interesting because most people feel that it is restricting, so I think you could have discussed this a little more. | I think your “About Me” section could have been a little more in depth for example; I would have liked to see more information about why you haven’t updated your content in a while and more about how you think others will use this section to judge you. I don’t think that it was necessary to write about advertisements on Facebook because other people don’t see the ads that are catered to you, therefore, they can’t really identify you based off of this but I can see how it could be a way you personally identify yourself. I wish your “Further Analysis” section could also have been slightly longer. The fact that you don’t think Facebook has any major restrictions is very interesting because most people feel that it is restricting, so I think you could have discussed this a little more. | ||
-Alissa | -Alissa | ||
Revision as of 22:35, 17 November 2012
After reading about your avatar, I found that I definitely did get a better sense of who you are and how you want to be portrayed online. I liked how honest you were when talking about how you choose your profile picture because I feel like many guys will not admit to choosing a picture they consider a decent looking picture of themselves and that they think about what others will think about them. I liked how you had a whole section to talk about music because it is obviously something that it very important to you and is a strong identifier of who you are in real life.
Some suggestions: I think your “About Me” section could have been a little more in depth for example; I would have liked to see more information about why you haven’t updated your content in a while and more about how you think others will use this section to judge you. I don’t think that it was necessary to write about advertisements on Facebook because other people don’t see the ads that are catered to you, therefore, they can’t really identify you based off of this but I can see how it could be a way you personally identify yourself. I wish your “Further Analysis” section could also have been slightly longer. The fact that you don’t think Facebook has any major restrictions is very interesting because most people feel that it is restricting, so I think you could have discussed this a little more. -Alissa
