Difference between revisions of "Talk:JJ Wright"
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Hi JJ! I thought your reflection on your online identity was really thorough and engaging. Your analysis was really clear and I really liked the way you organized and broke up that section. I think the way you separated your information was very successful and made the structure of your writing super easy to read. If I could suggest one thing it would be to add a little bit of personal charm to your headers. Your writing has so much style and personality I just thought it would be nice if the headers matched that energy. Other than that great read and good luck on the revision, it should be super easy for you! | Hi JJ! I thought your reflection on your online identity was really thorough and engaging. Your analysis was really clear and I really liked the way you organized and broke up that section. I think the way you separated your information was very successful and made the structure of your writing super easy to read. If I could suggest one thing it would be to add a little bit of personal charm to your headers. Your writing has so much style and personality I just thought it would be nice if the headers matched that energy. Other than that great read and good luck on the revision, it should be super easy for you! | ||
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+ | Great job on this piece. I really enjoyed reading about how your digital footprint has developed, especially in regards to your dad and online privacy. I thought your introduction was solid and presented your background information in a simple, effective, and anecdotal way. I also really appreciated the way you structured the statement. Transitions from paragraph to paragraph were very clean and the topic sentences made your discussion points more organized. |
Revision as of 14:45, 25 February 2021
Hi JJ! I thought your reflection on your online identity was really thorough and engaging. Your analysis was really clear and I really liked the way you organized and broke up that section. I think the way you separated your information was very successful and made the structure of your writing super easy to read. If I could suggest one thing it would be to add a little bit of personal charm to your headers. Your writing has so much style and personality I just thought it would be nice if the headers matched that energy. Other than that great read and good luck on the revision, it should be super easy for you! - Taylor Kelly
Comments from Sam Rechner
Hi JJ,
Great job on this piece. I really enjoyed reading about how your digital footprint has developed, especially in regards to your dad and online privacy. I thought your introduction was solid and presented your background information in a simple, effective, and anecdotal way. I also really appreciated the way you structured the statement. Transitions from paragraph to paragraph were very clean and the topic sentences made your discussion points more organized.