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Revision as of 00:13, 27 February 2020
Hi Hailey! This wiki entry of yours is AWESOME! It's sort of in this timeline format, showing the journey of your digital life. Overall this was very enjoyable! It's interesting how the databroker report made claims regarding past owned vehicles or past addresses that you weren't aware about. Is it something to be concerned about? Probably not, but it sure is interesting!
I do have some suggestions: I would add References section and connect your digital life and the process of data scraping to one of the class readings, maybe adding in a new section for that as well. Other than that, this entry is pretty solid. There's a lot of concise information in each section already and it flows great!
- Jack Pakela
Hi Hailey, I thought your data identity statement was fantastic. By comparing your google search results today with the search results of 4 years ago, you made a really strong point that your online identity is always changing. You covered your data broker report well, and I thought it was a great idea that you included some of your own research into voter identification records. In your final draft, I believe it will be fairly easy for you to incorporate class concepts and readings to make your piece more complete. Your organization of your statement was really well done, and your images added to the readability of the piece.
-Harrison Crandall
