Talk:Hailey Harris
Hi Hailey! This wiki entry of yours is AWESOME! It's sort of in this timeline format, showing the journey of your digital life. Overall this was very enjoyable! It's interesting how the databroker report made claims regarding past owned vehicles or past addresses that you weren't aware about. Is it something to be concerned about? Probably not, but it sure is interesting!
I do have some suggestions: I would add References section and connect your digital life and the process of data scraping to one of the class readings, maybe adding in a new section for that as well. Other than that, this entry is pretty solid. There's a lot of concise information in each section already and it flows great!
- Jack Pakela
Hi Hailey, I thought your data identity statement was fantastic. By comparing your google search results today with the search results of 4 years ago, you made a really strong point that your online identity is always changing. You covered your data broker report well, and I thought it was a great idea that you included some of your own research into voter identification records. In your final draft, I believe it will be fairly easy for you to incorporate class concepts and readings to make your piece more complete. Your organization of your statement was really well done, and your images added to the readability of the piece.
-Harrison Crandall
I like the structure that you presented your content in and the core ideas of each section. Although I notice these gaps while reading your identity statement. I'd recommend you re-read your statement or even better to speak it out loud and you will notice these gaps that I am talking about. Overall you did very well.
- Juan Sanchez
Your data identity profile was really interesting to read and was very detailed! I really enjoyed the flow of your writing and it was engaging throughout. One thing that you could consider adding would be the availability of your social media information on Google and what that means given how much information we can retrieve about random people from social media.
-Anish Raparla
Hi Hailey
Your data profile was very well written for a first draft! I love the way you set it up to be a chronological journey through your online life. It made me feel as though I was on the journey with you and really helps readers engage with the reading. The only suggestion I can offer is discussing how you felt about the data that was available to you: was it too much? Too little? How did the data that you found online about yourself make you feel? Other than that your entry was very well written.
- Pratik Goswami
