Difference between revisions of "Talk:Hagan Surkamer"
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| − | Great post! I think you did a nice job of explaining all of your findings from your research and provided a nice overview of your feelings after completing your investigation. I also thought the way you connected your findings to specific ideas from class readings was well done and provided solid analysis. A suggestion from me to improve would be to expand more on your offered solutions to the problems you found. I think it would be a great addition to your post if you were to go into more detail about what social media sites can do to help users feel more control of their privacy, and what the consequences of doing something like this would be. Adding this second layer of analysis would round out your article well, in my opinion. | + | Great post! I think you did a nice job of explaining all of your findings from your research and provided a nice overview of your feelings after completing your investigation. I also thought the way you connected your findings to specific ideas from class readings was well done and provided solid analysis. A suggestion from me to improve would be to expand more on your offered solutions to the problems you found. I think it would be a great addition to your post if you were to go into more detail about what social media sites can do to help users feel more in control of their privacy, and what the consequences of doing something like this would be. You also mentioning having greater autonomy online, I think to add more detail on this and what types of things you might do after completing your research to help take control of your privacy online would be interesting. Adding this second layer of analysis would round out your article well, in my opinion. |
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Andrew Guise
Great post! I think you did a nice job of explaining all of your findings from your research and provided a nice overview of your feelings after completing your investigation. I also thought the way you connected your findings to specific ideas from class readings was well done and provided solid analysis. A suggestion from me to improve would be to expand more on your offered solutions to the problems you found. I think it would be a great addition to your post if you were to go into more detail about what social media sites can do to help users feel more in control of their privacy, and what the consequences of doing something like this would be. You also mentioning having greater autonomy online, I think to add more detail on this and what types of things you might do after completing your research to help take control of your privacy online would be interesting. Adding this second layer of analysis would round out your article well, in my opinion.
