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| − | Great article! I think you did a nice job of explaining all of your findings from your research and provided a nice overview of your feelings after completing your investigation. I also thought the way you connected your findings to specific ideas from class readings was well done and provided solid analysis. A suggestion from me to improve would be to expand more on your offered solutions to the problems you found. I think it would a great addition to your article if you were to go | + | Great article! I think you did a nice job of explaining all of your findings from your research and provided a nice overview of your feelings after completing your investigation. I also thought the way you connected your findings to specific ideas from class readings was well done and provided solid analysis. A suggestion from me to improve would be to expand more on your offered solutions to the problems you found. I think it would be a great addition to your article if you were to go into more detail about what social media sites can do to help users feel more control of their privacy, and what the consequences of doing something like this would be. Adding this second layer of analysis would round out your article well, in my opinion. |
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Andrew Guise
Great article! I think you did a nice job of explaining all of your findings from your research and provided a nice overview of your feelings after completing your investigation. I also thought the way you connected your findings to specific ideas from class readings was well done and provided solid analysis. A suggestion from me to improve would be to expand more on your offered solutions to the problems you found. I think it would be a great addition to your article if you were to go into more detail about what social media sites can do to help users feel more control of their privacy, and what the consequences of doing something like this would be. Adding this second layer of analysis would round out your article well, in my opinion.
