Talk:George Lu

Hello George! Great job with your avatar autobiography! I really liked how you made a distinction between two major themes; audience & authenticity. The section about your content shifting as you became more aware of your audience ties in really great with the reading and also represents changes in who your potential audience is. Personally, I would really suggest that you tease out the section "Profile Pictures". I think it has a lot of potential for analysis! I think you bring up a really interesting point about "first impression" through the profile picture. It speaks to the theme of authenticity and clearly you argue that it does not entirely capture who you are. Why does the profile picture carry so much meaning and what gets lost when having a profile picture? Similarly, I think it would be great to see you have more discussion in "Other parts of me". Just keeping in mind what Prof. Conway said, try going beyond summarizing. You have clearly worked really hard on this and it was a pleasure to read! I appreciate how you really emphasized your argument that Facebook cannot replace face-to-face interactions and represents only a subsection of who you are. For your revisions, I would just suggest building off of those themes a bit more! But otherwise it all looks great, layout and content! -Meera