Difference between revisions of "Talk:Formspring"
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At a length of 93 words, this page falls short of the 3000-word requirement. You have a long ways to go, but I think you have a good topic with a lot to write about. You make mention of "Cyberbullying" and "Associated Suicides" in the controversies section, but no text has been added yet to describe them. Ethical issues can include censorship, hate speech, bullying, etc. You should have no problem meeting the 3000-word mark. | At a length of 93 words, this page falls short of the 3000-word requirement. You have a long ways to go, but I think you have a good topic with a lot to write about. You make mention of "Cyberbullying" and "Associated Suicides" in the controversies section, but no text has been added yet to describe them. Ethical issues can include censorship, hate speech, bullying, etc. You should have no problem meeting the 3000-word mark. | ||
== Structure == | == Structure == | ||
| − | The introduction certainly introduces the topic at hand but makes no mention of the controversy surrounding Formspring. You will likely want to introduce this issue in the introduction of your article. There is no body section to this article | + | The introduction certainly introduces the topic at hand but makes no mention of the controversy surrounding Formspring. You will likely want to introduce this issue in the introduction of your article. There is no body section text to this article, but it does have headers. The history of Formspring, platform mechanics, and controversies will all be covered. As for sources, while you don't have any yet, this site has been covered in quite a few articles about cyberbullying, and I have no doubt you will be able to find fantastic sources. |
== Clarity == | == Clarity == | ||
I have a clear idea where you plan to go with this article, but the issues are not made clear for a reader with no outside knowledge of the site. Make sure you explain the ethical implications of cyberbullying and free speech. | I have a clear idea where you plan to go with this article, but the issues are not made clear for a reader with no outside knowledge of the site. Make sure you explain the ethical implications of cyberbullying and free speech. | ||
== Objective Reporting == | == Objective Reporting == | ||
While there isn't a lot of words, what you did have was all objective. This is a topic where I could see it be very easy to state personal opinions. Make sure to keep avoiding that. Otherwise, best of luck and good job so far. | While there isn't a lot of words, what you did have was all objective. This is a topic where I could see it be very easy to state personal opinions. Make sure to keep avoiding that. Otherwise, best of luck and good job so far. | ||
Revision as of 21:52, 4 February 2022
Length
At a length of 93 words, this page falls short of the 3000-word requirement. You have a long ways to go, but I think you have a good topic with a lot to write about. You make mention of "Cyberbullying" and "Associated Suicides" in the controversies section, but no text has been added yet to describe them. Ethical issues can include censorship, hate speech, bullying, etc. You should have no problem meeting the 3000-word mark.
Structure
The introduction certainly introduces the topic at hand but makes no mention of the controversy surrounding Formspring. You will likely want to introduce this issue in the introduction of your article. There is no body section text to this article, but it does have headers. The history of Formspring, platform mechanics, and controversies will all be covered. As for sources, while you don't have any yet, this site has been covered in quite a few articles about cyberbullying, and I have no doubt you will be able to find fantastic sources.
Clarity
I have a clear idea where you plan to go with this article, but the issues are not made clear for a reader with no outside knowledge of the site. Make sure you explain the ethical implications of cyberbullying and free speech.
Objective Reporting
While there isn't a lot of words, what you did have was all objective. This is a topic where I could see it be very easy to state personal opinions. Make sure to keep avoiding that. Otherwise, best of luck and good job so far.
