Talk:Flo

- The article is not 3000+- 100 words. However, the editor has included the titles for what they are going to talk about and they have the background with some references on the. I would recommend elaborate more and adding more information for the final draft for full completion. And also to make sure to connect the topic to information technology and the ethics behind it. I think this is a really good topic.

-The article does include an opening paragraph, but it lack background information and body of the article. Although, it does have the section titles, the sections are missing. The article has a history section which is a nice add on. However, it does lack a majority of the major components. The editor needs to add more explanation to how this product/app is considered an information technology component and how it could ethically affect individuals and I think a good idea would also to talk about the perspective of this app in different cultures and how that is affected by its use and the information put in it. One more thing that could be talked about is that the flo app does ask questions to get more accurate measurements so how real are the answers to these questions would be a thing to look into.

-this is only a draft, and there is not much written by the editor, but from what is there I think the issue at stake is clear with the section titles used. I think I know where the author is going to take this topic and to what extent. Therefore, I think that the final draft will be very well written when all the information is summed up.

-I do not think there is an objective recording, the author is only trying to show how this app could have ethical issues that fall from it, which is true. They are doing research with reference to find the ethical issues behind it and how it could be harmful.