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I really like your construction and analysis of your online data identity. I think that it is really unique that you have a nickname that you go by -- I think that your comparative analysis of your online profile based on the two names is really great and flows really well. I think that the way you set it up to be a difference between the two search queries effectively strengthens your thesis. I also liked how you broadened your analysis at the end to wrap up your argument, you made some really good points there and it helped deepen your analysis of your online identity. | I really like your construction and analysis of your online data identity. I think that it is really unique that you have a nickname that you go by -- I think that your comparative analysis of your online profile based on the two names is really great and flows really well. I think that the way you set it up to be a difference between the two search queries effectively strengthens your thesis. I also liked how you broadened your analysis at the end to wrap up your argument, you made some really good points there and it helped deepen your analysis of your online identity. | ||
One way I think this could be improved is talking a little bit more about how you performed your searches -- i.e. did you use incognito mode, Google Chrome, etc and how might that impact what the search finds, if at all. It also might be more visually appealing to add an image at the top where all the white space is by the contents outline box. Overall, I really liked reading this! | One way I think this could be improved is talking a little bit more about how you performed your searches -- i.e. did you use incognito mode, Google Chrome, etc and how might that impact what the search finds, if at all. It also might be more visually appealing to add an image at the top where all the white space is by the contents outline box. Overall, I really liked reading this! | ||
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Aidan Haase's comments
Hi Elizabeth,
I really like your construction and analysis of your online data identity. I think that it is really unique that you have a nickname that you go by -- I think that your comparative analysis of your online profile based on the two names is really great and flows really well. I think that the way you set it up to be a difference between the two search queries effectively strengthens your thesis. I also liked how you broadened your analysis at the end to wrap up your argument, you made some really good points there and it helped deepen your analysis of your online identity. One way I think this could be improved is talking a little bit more about how you performed your searches -- i.e. did you use incognito mode, Google Chrome, etc and how might that impact what the search finds, if at all. It also might be more visually appealing to add an image at the top where all the white space is by the contents outline box. Overall, I really liked reading this!
