Talk:Elizabeth Bott

Aidan Haase's comments:

Hi Elizabeth,

I really like your construction and analysis of your online data identity. I think that it is really unique that you have a nickname that you go by -- I think that your comparative analysis of your online profile based on the two names is really great and flows really well. I think that the way you set it up to be a difference between the two search queries effectively strengthens your thesis. I also liked how you broadened your analysis at the end to wrap up your argument, you made some really good points there and it helped deepen your analysis of your online identity. One way I think this could be improved is talking a little bit more about how you performed your searches -- i.e. did you use incognito mode, Google Chrome, etc and how might that impact what the search finds, if at all. It also might be more visually appealing to add an image at the top where all the white space is by the contents outline box. Overall, I really liked reading this!

Comment: Kelsey Burns

Hi Lizzy,

I think you have a really interesting angle here! I feel like many of us have heard about the hidden evils of the internet and have intentionally strayed away from oversharing online. I also like how you talk about thinking what we see online is what you get, but also thinking that it’s not necessarily true for ourselves. One thing you left me wondering was if you’re happy with your digital identity. You mentioned that some of your great qualities do get to shine through, but I’d also be interested to hear what qualities aren’t there that you wish someone on the internet could know about you? You have a great, personable style going on here that made it easy and interesting to keep reading.