Talk:Ege Gunes

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Very well done overall Ege, I appreciate the strength of your thesis and the sewing of that threat through your ID draft up to the very end with the ethical implications. You attended to the word limit very well, hit all the major points, and gave equally strong and light-hearted examples to support your claims and to detail your exploration. I don't have much as far as a recommendation of edits, and in fact, I may steal the idea of "ethics and implications" as a section to restructure my own ID draft, but I would say that you should (and easily could, given the strength of your draft) associate concepts with the readings we have done and include them as technical references. Though it is not explicitly mandatory, some of the examples from last years include as much, and I think it would really complete your Data ID statement. Cheers -Noah McGuire

Comment by Santiago Perez

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