Talk:Dominic Dell'Imperio

Review from Rachel Kaufman-Levine:

Hi Dominic, I really enjoyed reading your data profile! It was fun, lighthearted, and easy to read because of the voice that you used. You really let your personality shine through, which I appreciated. I liked how you structured your profile into clear and distinct sections. Doing so made the piece flow well and helped to keep me engaged as I was reading. Overall you did a wonderful job describing your findings while capturing your audience throughout. From here, my suggestion would be to expand on the reflection side of things. It's great to see what information you found about yourself; I specifically thought it was interesting when you mentioned that since you have the same name as your dad that his data was mistaken for yours on Instant Checkmate. However, I would love to see more about your thoughts on data privacy and how much control we should have over what information of ours is public or not. I would also love to see you talk about the question "Are we more or less than our data?" from discussion as I feel it could add relevant depth to your profile. Best of luck, and keep up the awesome work!