Talk:Deus Ex: Human Revolution

Thanks for the phrasing notice. Because I've played this game a lot but wanted to make sure I didn't miss anything of importance, I referenced several articles on other pages but I think I did end up overly relying on the Deus Ex Wikia. I rewrote the entire plot synopsis from memory around the core points, and I think it is now pretty wholly original. Any similarities that remain are a result of the fact that it's a linear and sequential story. ABrewster (talk) 23:36, 8 Dec 2012 (EDT)

it reads better than the deus ex wikia now, it has a sense of style and personality unlike the deus ex wikia which is a little painful to read. you should consider editing their site.