Talk:Desmond Kolean-Burley

I thought you did a great job analyzing the shortcomings of Facebook and how those affect the identity you are able to portray online. I liked how you evaluated the progression of your Facebook usage through time, noticing that it changed. I also enjoyed the honesty that you put into describing the process of choosing your profile pictures. It was great that you mentioned how events that were occurring in your real life affected the picture you chose to be (or not to be) your profile picture, such as whether you had a girlfriend or not. Overall, I thought you did a great job describing your own disconnect of authenticity and embodiment through Facebook over time. In terms of style, I thought your piece was logically well-crafted, and well-organized. Also, your gif was visually appealing, fun, and very creative. -Cara Baughman