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This was a VERY interesting "autobiography" to read. First of all, I appreciate the humor and the fairy-tale-fox-like-trickster character that you show through this piece. The layout of the page is also unique in that you centered all of your images, but that makes this all the more different and reflective of your aesthetics in a sense. I liked that you included the tumblr post that first pricked your concerns over Facebook privacy. I have read a lot about people having concerns over Facebook privacy, but yours has an actual basis, in addition to the "random 16-year olds" friending you. I also liked your style of writing. You emphasized certain words by using all-capitals, giving more tone and character to what you wrote, faithfully conveying the humor that you were trying to get at. Nice job! -- Chihiro | This was a VERY interesting "autobiography" to read. First of all, I appreciate the humor and the fairy-tale-fox-like-trickster character that you show through this piece. The layout of the page is also unique in that you centered all of your images, but that makes this all the more different and reflective of your aesthetics in a sense. I liked that you included the tumblr post that first pricked your concerns over Facebook privacy. I have read a lot about people having concerns over Facebook privacy, but yours has an actual basis, in addition to the "random 16-year olds" friending you. I also liked your style of writing. You emphasized certain words by using all-capitals, giving more tone and character to what you wrote, faithfully conveying the humor that you were trying to get at. Nice job! -- Chihiro | ||
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| + | I'm glad I chose to do one of my peer reviews on your article because it was quite entertaining to read. The tone that you chose to write in didn't come across as completely serious or genuine, but that was obviously your point. Although the reader might question the validity of some of your statements in this assignment, the one thing that comes across completely genuinely is your sense of humor. This actually helps to prove your point that you don't take your online interactions as seriously as IRL interactions. Your online personality definitely shines through in this article and I enjoyed reading it, but for the sake of suggestions I would say that you could have expanded on elements of your Facebook page besides your profile pictures and likes (cover photo, status updates, your comments on other people's content, etc). Additionally, to be a little nit-picky about the format, you didn't include a link back to the index of avatars or a table of contents at the top of your article, which are standard for any wiki page. | ||
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Revision as of 20:45, 20 November 2012
Peer Review 1 This was a VERY interesting "autobiography" to read. First of all, I appreciate the humor and the fairy-tale-fox-like-trickster character that you show through this piece. The layout of the page is also unique in that you centered all of your images, but that makes this all the more different and reflective of your aesthetics in a sense. I liked that you included the tumblr post that first pricked your concerns over Facebook privacy. I have read a lot about people having concerns over Facebook privacy, but yours has an actual basis, in addition to the "random 16-year olds" friending you. I also liked your style of writing. You emphasized certain words by using all-capitals, giving more tone and character to what you wrote, faithfully conveying the humor that you were trying to get at. Nice job! -- Chihiro
Peer Review 2 I'm glad I chose to do one of my peer reviews on your article because it was quite entertaining to read. The tone that you chose to write in didn't come across as completely serious or genuine, but that was obviously your point. Although the reader might question the validity of some of your statements in this assignment, the one thing that comes across completely genuinely is your sense of humor. This actually helps to prove your point that you don't take your online interactions as seriously as IRL interactions. Your online personality definitely shines through in this article and I enjoyed reading it, but for the sake of suggestions I would say that you could have expanded on elements of your Facebook page besides your profile pictures and likes (cover photo, status updates, your comments on other people's content, etc). Additionally, to be a little nit-picky about the format, you didn't include a link back to the index of avatars or a table of contents at the top of your article, which are standard for any wiki page. -Vince Zobel
