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| − | incredibly well done, a phenomenal job!<br> | + | (incredibly well done, a phenomenal job!)<br> |
{{formatText|{{font|size|16}}{{font|type|arial}}|From the synchronism of your facebook page with your writing style and self reflection emerges a clear image of who you are. This stands in stark contrast to the bare presentation of self that is projected on facebook. An yet it is a bold statement that less is often more. Though arriving at this understanding is only possible through your self disclosure in this your avatar biography. That is: while the reasons for withholding information about oneself vary greatly and even as assumptions can be drawn from this, the {{italic|depth}} of your avatar's personality cannot be fully experienced without the details you have chosen to expose for this assignment. But as this disclosure is purposeful and willing, i am left feeling as if standing at a true precipice, not knowing what you have left behind, hidden. You have chosen to reveal your motherhood but at the same time i wonder whether you also meant to disclose your own biases. While i am not privy to your past and cannot know what prejudices you have endured, i question whether your statement that: {{italic|"there are still stigmas and stereotypes about marrying and having children at a young age"}} reflects more on how you view yourself or perceive to be viewed than how others truly view you? (i.e. it is true that there are stereotypes surrounding young marriages and motherhood, but marriage and children are a challenge at any age.) i am left curious about your experience with this assignment. It seems you felt that in order to complete the assignment you had to reveal more about yourself than you would do normally. i would like to have heard more about how you managed this and how you decided what to present here now in this assignment and how it affected you, but then again as your name suggests be aware: {{italic|{{bold|deep waters}} beware.}}}} | {{formatText|{{font|size|16}}{{font|type|arial}}|From the synchronism of your facebook page with your writing style and self reflection emerges a clear image of who you are. This stands in stark contrast to the bare presentation of self that is projected on facebook. An yet it is a bold statement that less is often more. Though arriving at this understanding is only possible through your self disclosure in this your avatar biography. That is: while the reasons for withholding information about oneself vary greatly and even as assumptions can be drawn from this, the {{italic|depth}} of your avatar's personality cannot be fully experienced without the details you have chosen to expose for this assignment. But as this disclosure is purposeful and willing, i am left feeling as if standing at a true precipice, not knowing what you have left behind, hidden. You have chosen to reveal your motherhood but at the same time i wonder whether you also meant to disclose your own biases. While i am not privy to your past and cannot know what prejudices you have endured, i question whether your statement that: {{italic|"there are still stigmas and stereotypes about marrying and having children at a young age"}} reflects more on how you view yourself or perceive to be viewed than how others truly view you? (i.e. it is true that there are stereotypes surrounding young marriages and motherhood, but marriage and children are a challenge at any age.) i am left curious about your experience with this assignment. It seems you felt that in order to complete the assignment you had to reveal more about yourself than you would do normally. i would like to have heard more about how you managed this and how you decided what to present here now in this assignment and how it affected you, but then again as your name suggests be aware: {{italic|{{bold|deep waters}} beware.}}}} | ||
| + | [[User:Mstuart|mstuart]] ([[User talk:Mstuart|talk]]) 00:07, 17 November 2012 (EST) | ||
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(incredibly well done, a phenomenal job!)
From the synchronism of your facebook page with your writing style and self reflection emerges a clear image of who you are. This stands in stark contrast to the bare presentation of self that is projected on facebook. An yet it is a bold statement that less is often more. Though arriving at this understanding is only possible through your self disclosure in this your avatar biography. That is: while the reasons for withholding information about oneself vary greatly and even as assumptions can be drawn from this, the depth of your avatar's personality cannot be fully experienced without the details you have chosen to expose for this assignment. But as this disclosure is purposeful and willing, i am left feeling as if standing at a true precipice, not knowing what you have left behind, hidden. You have chosen to reveal your motherhood but at the same time i wonder whether you also meant to disclose your own biases. While i am not privy to your past and cannot know what prejudices you have endured, i question whether your statement that: "there are still stigmas and stereotypes about marrying and having children at a young age" reflects more on how you view yourself or perceive to be viewed than how others truly view you? (i.e. it is true that there are stereotypes surrounding young marriages and motherhood, but marriage and children are a challenge at any age.) i am left curious about your experience with this assignment. It seems you felt that in order to complete the assignment you had to reveal more about yourself than you would do normally. i would like to have heard more about how you managed this and how you decided what to present here now in this assignment and how it affected you, but then again as your name suggests be aware: deep waters beware.
mstuart (talk) 00:07, 17 November 2012 (EST)
