Talk:Chancellor Evans
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Jonathan Timma: Overall I thought your autobiography was good. I liked that you shared some personal information about yourself and how that affects what you do/don't do on Facebook (which is accurate). My only criticism would be that in the Ethical Acculturation section. The beginning didn't feel "autobiographic". You stated Professor Conway and what we talked about in class as if the entire world knows Professor Conway is and what we talked about in that lecture. Granted, our class can see this, but to make it more "autobiographical" I would have said something to the extent of "I had a professor named Paul Conway and in one of his lectures we talked about X, Y and Z...". Other than that I thought it was good.
