Talk:Cash App

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The word count of the Cash App article did not reach the required word count of 3000 words. The article did have a decent amount of writing with about 1000 words. The lead paragraph of the article had an adequate amount of detail to introduce the topic to the reader even if they are unfamiliar with the material. The History section of the article is broken into two subsections. The first subsection details the history Cash App's development. For an app that was developed five years ago in 2017 there could be more information included in the section to better describe the development history of the app. The other subsection, Growth and giveaways, gave a lot of useful information on the subject. Perhaps with more time the author of the article could include some other subsections to History like other notable events in the app's history. App features, another section in the article has five subsections the first four seem to have enough detail. However, the fifth subsection, Investing, could dive deeper into how investing in cryptocurrencies and stocks work on the platform. Particularly, the author could include if there are transaction fees or if fractional trading is possible. The competitors section is empty but from the subsection titles it seems that the author will be able to write meaningful information in the future. The final section, Ethical concerns, is incomplete. However, their first subsection, Fraud, is well written and detailed. They have another subsection which is empty. The author should be able to finish this subsection and add more subsections about the ethics of Cash App.