Talk:Caryn Laska

I think that your analysis of your Facebook use is accurate. We haven't been Facebook friends for a very long time, but I know you're not someone who posts super often. It seems like you are someone who does think before you post. It was interesting to learn about how you decide what is appropriate and interesting to your audience. It's also clear that you spent some time thinking about how you want to be perceived and how you are actually coming across to people. As far as the over all structure and writing style of your assignment, I think you did really well. I really like how you used the warped photo because I think this adds a lot to how your essay addresses the question are you the same on Facebook as in real life. I also really like how you used questions, they helped to break up your sections and keep readers interested. One improvement I think you could make is to go into a little bit more detail about your examples to help provide your readers with more context to the situation. -Casey Sunden