Talk:Caroline Taketa

Comment from Catherine Grillo: Hi Caroline – I loved reading your wiki page! First, I really loved your analysis and commentary of your own online identity and relationship with social media. I found this to be very insightful and engaging. I think you do an amazing job of really diving into what your online identity means to you and how it differs from you in real life. Additionally, I liked that you explained the process Google goes through when someone inputs a search query. This process you explained was very well written and makes what is happening within the search engine much clearer to users. One thing I might suggest is a deeper dive into why you think data brokers listed people as related to you when they are not your actual relatives. I find this topic interesting and sometimes wonder how these sites infer who is a relative and who is not. One other thing I might suggest is that you can give a brief explanation as to why you used incognito mode in Google. Not everyone knows of this mode, and an explanation might help users learn why incognito mode would be important for an assignment like this where we search ourselves on the internet. Lastly, one part I especially enjoyed was your use of sources, I thought they added a lot to the piece! Overall, I loved your entire page, it was very well written and super insightful!