Talk:Bailee Stirn

Bailee

It is extremely interesting how you tackled your abundance of online information specifically the fact that you are from a small town with a very unique name made queries about you specific and on point. As a result, you focused a lot on the abundance of information that you found online with pictures that seems genuine. In addition, the fact that you closely alludes to class material make your reflection especially authentic. With that said, I also like the fact that you have two different sections under pattern one for what they got right and one for what they got wrong. However, you never elaborated on what specific pattern is there within what they got wrong and what they got right, you explained how they got somethings wrong and somethings right, but there really isn’t any explanation on why so I would recommend either changing the title or elaborate more on what specific pattern you saw. Finally, your writing style is clear and concise with a strong flair of your own personality so there’s nothing much to change for that.