Talk:Audris Teh

Upon reviewing Audris' autobiography, I found various elements that I think she executed well, as well as some things that I think she could improve on in order to strengthen her piece.

Audris does a nice job of describing her use of the various Facebook elements she is active on, but I think she could have further analyzed the relationship between her online identity and true identity.

To Be Continued...

Hi Audris,

I enjoyed reading your portrayal of your online avatar and found that your inclusion of many specific examples and pictures contributed well to your content. I think you organized the content very well, with a "Audris, IRL" section and an "Audris on Facebook" section, distinguishing between the two identities and having individual discussions on each. However, I think there could have been a section or more of an elaborate discussion on the ties between your online and real self. From what I read, I can gather a bit of how you are in real life through the basic details you have outlined and from what is present on your profile, and I can see the different ways you use your Facebook profile to portray your online self, but how much of each are tied into each other and how do they relate? It would also be interesting to read on why or how you have come to use your facebook the way that you do. This could also be included in the "Facebook usage" section at the end. Although you do mention the amount of time that you use facebook and that the main reason you use it is for chatting online, this could also be elaborated upon with a deeper explanation or understanding of your online presence and how or why it is that way. Overall, I thought that you did a great job in the organization of your content and basic details of your avatar, but it would have been more interesting and meaningful to understand the reasoning behind the ways that you portray your real and online self and how they tie in together as well.

Emily