Talk:Arif Jamaluddin

John Wisniewski's review of Arif Jamaluddin's data identity post

Overall, I thought your post was very interesting. I found similar results when exploring my own data identity, so it was surprising to see this reflected in your piece. I think you did a great job explaining your identity and also its impacts. It was very clear how your online identity reflected your real identity. I also really enjoyed the conclusions you drew about your identity, I think you made some really good points, especially about your voting information. For the quality of the piece, I feel that the overall style could be improved. Especially in the first paragraph under “Accuracy of Information,” it felt some of the sentences could be connected better. I really liked the last sentence in this paragraph though, it made a great point. Other than that, I thought the ordering and flow was pretty good!