Talk:Anish Raparla

Anish:

This was a very well written, concise, and effective article. You eloquently summed up exactly what was asked of you for this Wiki article and also provided relevant photos to supplement your article.

I enjoyed your introduction and how you provided a brief background of yourself in order for us to get a feel for who you are as a person so that we understand what your results might have left off. Compared to myself, it seems your results were actually a little more eye-opening, thus really interesting. I feel like your article would've benefitted from you going into the unique-ness of your name and how that might make it easier for the Google algorithm or the Databroker website to pick you out of a pool of other people.

I also enjoyed the story of you finding out about a relative that you never had. That's something you might want to expand a little more on because it was really interesting!

The way you sectioned off your article and your organization in general was really good. With a few minor tweaks and fixing a couple of grammatical errors I think this would be perfect! Good job!

-Amen Al-Moamen

Kunal Singh's Comment

Anish, I think you did a great job breaking down how easy it was to find yourself on Google and how that made you feel. Your voice was easily heard through your concerns and worries about how easily you found a lot of information about yourself through pretty simple searches. One thing you could improve with would be to include something from the readings related to ease of information. Being able to find yourself that easily is definitely scary and shows how powerful modern technology can be. If you connect that point back to one of the readings and tie that together with your Google search results, it could improve your post. Nice job!